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THE WORSHIPPERS AND THE WAY - plot summary
Hugh Cook writes 2003: in my archives I found this chapter by chapter plot summary for THE WORSHIPPERS AND THE WAY, volume nine of the CHRONICLES OF AN AGE OF DARKNESS series. This appears to be the plot of the book as published. Note that the entire text of this book is on this site and is accessible through <../hugh-cook/free-novels.html">free online novels.
chapter by chapter plot summary
Chronicles of an Age of Darkness
Volume 9
The Worshippers and the Way
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Plot summary - 11 October 1990
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This plot summary is a chapter-by-chapter analysis of the
text of the final draft of this novel. The setting is Dalar ken
Halvar, capital of the impoverished continent of Parengarenga. In
Dalar ken Halvar is a Combat College, a Nexus asset which still
trains Startroopers for the Stormforce of the Nexus. The key
characters of this novel are:-
(1): Asodo Hatch, a Frangoni warrior.
(2): Lupus Lon Oliver, an Ebrell Islander.
(3): Paraban Senk: the computerised ruler of the Combat
College.
The novel begins when Asodo Hatch and Lupus Lon Oliver are
set on a collison course, for both want to win the single
instructorship position which falls vacant with the death of Hiji
Hanojo. The plot details the course of the struggle between Hatch
and Lupus.
* * *
Prologue: Hiji Hanojo, the instructor of Dalar ken Halvar's
Combat College, is found dead. Paraban Senk, the unembodied asma
who runs the Combat College, decides that a new instructor will be
chosen by competitive examination in three years' time. The two
students of the Combat College who have the greatest chance of
winning the instructorship are the Startroopers Asodo Hatch and
Lupus Lon Oliver. Hatch is a purple-skinned Frangoni warrior,
whereas Lupus is a redskinned Ebrell Islander, and the two are
bitter rivals. The prologue is set three years before the final
showdown between Hatch and Lupus.
Chapter 1. A year before the showdown between the Ebrell
Islander Lon Oliver and the Frangoni warrior Asodo Hatch, Lupus is
seen training for battle in the illusion tanks of Dalar ken
Halvar's Combat College - and his fear of Hatch is made plain.
Chapter 2. Six months before the showdown between the Ebrell
Islander Lon Oliver and the Frangoni warrior Asodo Hatch, Hatch
and family by the banks of the Yamoda. The Silver Emperor, the
great Plandruk Qinplaqus, is in attendance at the funeral of
Hatch's father. The emperor leaves, and Hatch has a brief
encounter with the noseless moneylender known as Polk the Cash. By
the time the chapter is over, Asodo Hatch has exchanged hard words
with his brother Oboro Bakendra Hatch, and has made the
acquaintance of the lady Iro Murasaki. It has also been
established that Hatch's wife is ill.
Chapter 3. A few days short of his showdown with the Frangoni
warrior Asodo Hatch, the Ebrell Islander Lon Oliver takes a break
from his theoretical examinations to do further singlefighter
training, after which he meets with Dog Java, a Combat Cadet. The
Startrooper Lon Oliver and the Combat Cadet Dog Java meet on the
bridge of a simulated Galactic Class MegaCommand Cruiser in deep
space. Dog Java is a member of the underclass (the "Unreal") but
wants to join Free Corps (which has an upper class membership of
"Real" people). Lupus says the situation has been considered. It
is possible: but Dog Java must kill Hatch to justify himself to
the Free Corps. Then he can become Real.
Chapter 4. The Frangoni warrior Asodo Hatch meets the Ebrell
Islander Lupus Lon Oliver in a singlefigher duel in the world of
the illusion tanks of Dalar ken Halvar's Combat College. Hatch
loses.
Chapter 5. Dog Java almost kills Hatch while Hatch debates
politics with beggars of the Yara, Dalar ken Halvar's underclass.
The beggars ask Hatch about Nu-chala-nuth. Hatch is disturbed by
the question, for the Nu-chala-nuth is a Nexus religion which
should by rights have been forgotten twenty thousand years ago.
Chapter 6. Asodo Hatch seeks guidance from Sesno Felvus, the
high priest of his god, the Great God Mokaragash. Hatch must
defeat Lon Oliver in the competitive examinations for an
instructor's position in the Combat College, else be financially
ruined. But he is not confident of his ability to defeat Lupus.
The High Priest suggests that Hatch resolve his difficulties
by allowing himself to be bribed by Lon Oliver.
While still on the temple precincts, Hatch is met by a group
of young men led by Son'sholoma Gezira of the didimo caste. They
ask him to reveal to them the teachings of the Nu-chala-nuth, an
alien religion which Hatch studied while training at the Combat
College. Hatch is horrified at the thought of the intolerant
fanaticism of the Nu-chala-nuth being released on his own planet.
Hatch denies Son'sholoma.
Note: at the end of chapter 6, it is the afternoon of the Day
of Five Fishes, just five days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 7. Hatch lectures his sister Penelope on her
extravagance. He barely survives a tense confrontation with his
brother Oboro Bakendra Hatch, a fanatical worshipper of the Great
God Mokaragash. Oboro Bakendra blames Hatch for liberating into
Dalar ken Halvar the alien doctrines of Nu-chala-nuth.
Note: at the end of chapter 7, it is the evening of the Day
of Five Fishes, just five days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 8. Hatch invites the Ebrell Islander Lupus Lon Oliver
to secure the instructorship of the Combat College by paying Hatch
a hefty bribe. Lupus is agreeable, but says he wants to marry
Hatch's sister Penelope, who is in love with him. Hatch has no
objection. Unfortunately Lupus's father, Manfred Gan Oliver,
forbids the match, and refuses to finance the necessary bribery of
Asodo Hatch unless Hatch will persuade Lupus to renounce his
relationship with Penelope - something Lupus refuses to do.
On the way home from a meeting with Manfred Gan Oliver, Asodo
Hatch learns that his daughter Onica has mortaged herself to the
moneylender Polk in order to pay for the opium necessary to govern
the pain of her mother's pancreatic cancer.
Note: at the end of chapter 8, it is early on the night of
the Day of Five Fishes, just five days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 9. At home, Hatch confirms that his daughter Onica
has mortgaged herself to the moneylender Polk.
Chapter 10. Hatch wakes at dawn on the Day of four Fishes,
just four days short of Dog Day, and proceeds to the Combat
College. Hatch finds himself paired with Lupus Lon Oliver in an
evasion exercise which is scheduled to run through the day, then
through the night, finishing at dawn on the Day of Three Fishes,
just three days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 11. During the exercise, Hatch suggests to Lupus that
they resolve their mutual problems by murdering Lupus's father - a
suggestion which is not well received. The exercise ends at dawn
on the Day of Three Fishes, just three days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 12. The day-after-the-night. Hatch exits from the
Combat College, mediates a dispute with beggars, is accosted by
the noseless moneylender Polk, and is almost struck down by Dog
Java, who flees back to the the Combat College after an
unsuccessful attempt at assassinating Hatch. Hatch intends to
pursue, but is restrained by Shona, who warns that Dog may be
leading Hatch into an ambush. It is the Day of Three Fishes, just
three days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 13. Asodo Hatch visits his lover, the Lady Iro
Murasaki. Unfortunately Murasaki upsets him by bringing up the
subject of his sister's debts. She, being rich, is unable to
conceive the truth of his poverty, even though he protests it
repeatedly. Hatch leaves Murasaki's house and is accosted by
Scorpio Fax, whom he almost kills, thinking him another assassin.
Fax warns Hatch of an impending revolution, and Hatch heads for
the palace to warn the Silver Emperor. As he does so, Hatch meets
soldiers who are on their way to put down a revolution. The slaves
at the silver mines are making revolution in the name of Nu-chala-
nuth. All these events occur in daylight on the Day of Three
Fishes, just three days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 14. In the palace of Na Sashimoko, Asodo Hatch
reports to the Silver Emperor on the growing evidence of the
danger of imminent revolution. He also appraises the emperor of
his financial plight, but finds that the emperor is not willing to
grant him extra funds. [NOTE: the Silver Emperor will shortly
vanish; his fate will be explained in volume 10, THE WITCHLORD AND
THE WEAPONMASTER]. Hatch leaves Silver Emperor, only to find that
the feared revolution has actually started. Hatch returns to the
palace but is told that the Silver Emperor cannot be disturbed. He
forces his way past guards and finds the emperor's chambers empty.
The Silver Emperor has disappeared. Hatch sees fires on the
Frangoni rock and heads for home. This chapter ends early in the
night of the Day of Three Fishes, just three days short of Dog
Day.
Chapter 15. As Dalar ken Halvar riots, Scorpio Fax - who is
in love with Hatch's sister Penelope - seeks out the moneylender
Polk the Cash, intending to kill him. Fax pursues Polk, who has
taken refuge in the house which is home to Asodo Hatch. There Fax
attacks Polk, and is arrested by Asodo Hatch. It is early night on
the Day of Three Fishes, just three days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 16. Early in the night of the Day of Three Fishes,
just three days short of Dog Day, Asodo Hatch takes Scorpio Fax to
the palace of Na Sashimoko, intending to have Fax imprisoned. In
the absence of the Silver Emperor, the rightful ruler of Dalar ken
Halvar is the Treasurer, a man named Berlin. However, Hatch finds
that Berlin has been overthrown. The Imperial Guard has joined the
Free Corps and the real families and has mounted a coup. Hatch and
Fax flee from Na Sashimoko and escape back to the Combat College.
On the way, Fax breaks away from Hatch and vanishes into the
night.
Chapter 17. The students of the Combat College gather in a
lecture theatre known as Forum Three. Paraban Senk declares that
graduation examinations will take place regardless of chaos
outside: in fact is good test of ability to function against a
background of war. Dog Java attempts to kill Hatch, but is
thwarted by Shona. Then Scorpio Fax enters Forum Three, hideously
wounded. Manfred Gan Oliver enters Forum Three.
Chapter 18. It is late at night on the Day of Three Fishes,
just three days short of Dog Day. As Asodo Hatch will soon be
fighting Lon Oliver for the one vacant instructor's position,
guests begin to gather to observe the combat. The guests include
Manfred Gan Oliver, Lupus Lupus's formidable father, who engages
Hatch in a political debate. Gan Oliver blames Hatch for
unleashing the Nu-chala-nuth - a Nexus religion - in Dalar ken
Halvar. Gan Oliver blames Hatch for the revolution of the Unreal.
Gan Oliver ends by threatening to exterminate every Frangoni in
Dalar ken Halvar.
Chapter 19. Asodo Hatch visits Scorpio Fax in the Combat
College's cure-all clinic and asks him to kill Manfred Gan Oliver.
Then Hatch readies himself for combat with Lupus Lon Oliver.
Hatch's visit to Scorpio Fax terminates at midnight. The Day of
Three Fishes is over. It is now the Day of Two Fishes, just two
days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 20. In a singlefighter duel which takes place in the
illusion tanks of Dalar ken Halvar's Combat College, Asodo Hatch
ejects from his war machine, that machine self-destructing moments
later. Lupus is destroyed when Hatch's machine self-destructs.
Hatch outsurvives Lupus and wins 0.0000057 of a point. Once free
from the illusion tanks, Lupus protests at this decision. While
Paraban Senk is adjudicating the matter, the Lady Iro Murasaki
enters Forum Three in the company of Hatch's sister Penelope, his
wife Talanta, his beloved daughter Onica and the moneylender Polk
the Cash. From these, Hatch learns of the mounting horror outside
the Combat College. Then it is time for him to fight again. He
asks Paraban Senk if he has any more visitors, and is told that
some beggars have come to watch him fight, but are presently being
washed. Combat then resumes. Note: Hatch's first singlefighter
duel with Lupus takes place in small hours of the morning on the
Day of Two Fishes, just two days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 21. The second singlefighter duel between Asodo Hatch
and Lupus Lon Oliver gets underway. Hatch is in a singlefighter,
flying above jungle. All instrumentation is currently disabled by
interference, meaning that his singlefighter is masked from Lupus,
and vice versa. Hatch lands his ship in the jungle, gets out of it
and destroys it. He expects Lupus to fly around until his own
singlefighter reaches the end of its combat life and crashes into
the jungle. Instead, Hatch shortly finds himself back in the
Combat College. Lupus is demanding that Paraban Senk adjudicate
the result of their latest clash. Note: this second singlefighter
duel takes place in the small hours of the morning on the Day of
Two Fishes, just two days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 22. Paraban Senk, the asma which runs Dalar ken
Halvar's Combat College, tells Asodo Hatch that it wants Lupus Lon
Oliver to be the Combat College's new instructor. Nevertheless,
Senk declares the latest clash between Hatch and Lupus to have
been a draw, and awards the contestants half a point each. Lupus
Lon Oliver's score is now 0.5. Asodo Hatch's score is now
0.5000057. Paraban Senk asks the combatants if they want a rest,
but they prefer to fight on. Note: Senk gives adjudication in the
small hours of the morning on the Day of Two Fishes, just two days
short of Dog Day.
Chapter 23. For their third and final illusion tank duel,
Asodo Hatch and Lon Oliver are each given command of a Galactic
Class MegaCommand Cruiser. Initially the two ships are in deep
space, and are separated by a probability disruption field which
is rapidly coming to the end of its effective life. This third and
final duel begins in the small hours of the morning of the Day of
Two Fishes, just two days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 24. As the probability disruption field collapses,
Hatch sets his own ship on a collision course with Lupus Lon
Oliver's vessel. Both ships draw motive power from machines which
manipulate probability. Hatch orders those probability manipulator
on board his own ship to self-destruct. This results in a
disruption of local probability which is so severe that both ships
are left helpless. They are, of course, still on a collision
course.
Meanwhile, back in Forum Three in the Combat College, Scorpio
Fax takes a seat by Manfred Gan Oliver, who is watching the
progress of the battle on display screens. Fax has a knife in his
pocket.
Note: The probability disruption field disintegrates at dawn
on the Day of Two Fishes, just two days short of Dog Day.
Chapter 25. As the illusion tank duel continues, The two
disabled ships collide, and Hatch fights his way inside Lupus's
ship. Hatch meets Lupus face to face and hacks off his head.
Note: Hatch hacks off Lupus Lon Oliver's head at mid-morning
on the Day of Two Fishes, the second-to-last day before Dog Day.
Chapter 26. Asodo Hatch enters Forum Three in triumph.
Paraban Senk says: "The graduating class has now finished. We have
a one hundred per cent pass rate. Those who have been unable to
take their final examinations have been passed on the basis of an
assessment of their work through the year and their performance in
past examinations. There is one promotion to announce: Asodo Hatch
is promoted to the post of resident instructor."
Paraban Senk gives final instructions to graduating class.
Lupus Lon Oliver refuses to leave, and leads an attack on Asodo
Hatch. In the fight that follows, Scorpio Fax tries to kill
Manfred Gan Oliver but botches the attempt. Paraban Senk subdues
the ensuing general riot by collapsing the ceiling on the rioters.
Note: the riot takes place at mid-morning on the Day of Two
Fishes.
Chapter 27. Lupus Lon Oliver is exiled from the Combat
College. Hatch sees him off. Manfred Gan Oliver is forced to leave
with his son Lupus, but says he will be waiting for Hatch outside
the lockway, and promises to murder Hatch and all Hatch's guests -
including Hatch's wife, his daughter Onica, and the Lady Iro
Murasaki.
Hatch opens negotiations with Paraban Senk. Then, early in
the afternoon of the Day of Two Fishes, the exhausted Asodo Hatch
lays himself down on his bed, and is plunged almost instantly into
the deepest of sleeps.
Chapter 28. Asodo Hatch sleeps through the afternoon of the
Day of Two Fishes, and through the night, waking at dawn on the
Day of the Last Fish, the day before Dog Day.
Hatch takes breakfast in the Combat College cafeteria, where
he is advised by beggars. He then retires to his own room and
endeavours to negotiate with Paraban Senk. Hatch seeks to win
sanctuary in the Combat College for his wife Talanta, for his
daughter Onica, and for the Lady Iro Murasaki. Paraban Senk,
conscious of the fact that the fabric and functions of the Combat
College are deteriorating with age, demands that Hatch take
control of Dalar ken Halvar and use the religious imperatives of
Nu-chala-nuth to unite the Empire of Greater Parengarenga and
organise a technological renaissance which will allow the Combat
College to be repaired and strengthened.
Chapter 29. Hatch plans his tactics with Paraban Senk. Senk
will announce that the Chasm Gates have been reopened, that
contact has been restored with the Nexus, and that all trained
Startroopers are to report to the Combat College immediately. Senk
will appoint Hatch as military governor of Dalar ken Halvar, and
will give him the task of negotiating a peace with those who are
making revolution in Dalar ken Halvar in the name of Nu-chala-
nuth.
Once all Startroopers are inside Cap Foz Para Lash, Paraban
Senk will take them prisoner - and will hold them until Hatch
orders them to be released. Hatch's task will then be to use his
authority over the Combat College as a bargaining chip as he seeks
to unify all of Dalar ken Halvar under his rule and to make
himself emperor.
Note that Hatch plans his tactics with Paraban Senk very
early in the morning of the Day of the Last Fish, the day before
Dog Day. Note that Paraban Senk is tender of the security of
those Free Corps members who are Startroopers, so Hatch promises
to ensure the long-term security of these, thus:-
"You don't have to hold them forever," said Hatch
impatiently. "Just give me a couple of days and I'll seize control
of Dalar ken Halvar. After that, well, I'll make my peace with
Manfred Gan Oliver. Once I've got control, control of the city,
the Free Corps will come to order very fast."
Paraban Senk is still disinclined to trust Asodo Hatch with
the safety of the Startroopers of the Combat College, and so takes
hostages to ensure Hatch's good behaviour. The hostages are
Hatch's wife Talanta, Hatch's daughter Onica, and the Lady Iro
Murasaki.
Chapter 30. Summoned by the Combat College, the members of
the Free Corps gather in the Combat College. Meanwhile, in the
palace of Na Sashimoko, Asodo Hatch outlines the truth to selected
Frangoni - including his brother Oboro. The political situation is
delicate. The Free Corps cannot be trusted even if its members
swear themselves to loyalty to Asodo Hatch. The people Pang, who
constitute the majority in Dalar ken Halvar, have no great love of
the Frangoni. Hatch believes that, for the Frangoni to survive,
they must consolidate their own position by striking a great blow
for Nu-chala-nuth - by wiping out the Free Corps, who constitute
the natural enemies of Nu-chala-nuth.
Chapter 31. It is Dog Day. After the Frangoni have destroyed
the Free Corps in an ambush, Hatch prepares himself to enter the
Combat College for a showdown with Paraban Senk, the Teacher of
Control who rules that College. Hatch enters the Combat College
and thereafter finds that he cannot leave that College. He heads
toward Forum Three and a showdown with Paraban Senk.
Chapter 32. In Forum Three, Hatch confronts Paraban Senk, who
is holding as hostages the Lady Iro Murasaki, Hatch's wife Talanta
and Hatch's daughter Onica. Paraban Senk is grossly upset with
Hatch, who has slaughtered almost all Startroopers trained by
Senk. Hatch explains his reasons. Senk threatens to exact a
terrible vengeance upon all those nearest and dearest to Asodo
Hatch - starting with those currently held hostage by Senk. Hatch
says that this is not a constructive response. Senk declares
himself to be human, and says that vengeance is but an aspect of
his humanity. Senk prepares to begin the destruction of those whom
Senk is holding hostage. Hatch responds by falling on his sword.
Chapter 33. Hatch wakes in the Combat College cure-all clinic
where he has been patched up after attempting to commit suicide by
falling on his sword. Senk says that the Combat College has been
placed under an inderdict by a Nu-chala-nuth priesthood led by
Hatch's brother Oboro Bakendra and by the noseless ex-moneylender
Polk the Cash. No person will be allowed into the Combat College
until Asodo Hatch has been yielded up by that College, alive and
well - and if Hatch cannot be yielded up, then the College will be
deprived of new students forever. (Which would, therefore, deprive
it of the means of fulfilling its overriding objective, which is
to train Startroopers for the Stormforce of the Nexus).
Accordingly, Senk negotiates a truce with Hatch.
Chapter 34. In a brief closing chapter, Hatch makes his peace
with Sesno Felvus, the High Priest of the Great God Mokaragash,
and the book is closed out by the statement of a suitable moral
and some Final Statements about gods, Evolution, and the leaf-like
nature of the praying mantis in flight.
ends
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