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Writing Poetry

        I'm writing these notes on writing poetry in the year 2003. At this stage I'm in my forties, and I've been writing poetry for most of my life. My first published work was poetry, and it was poetry, initially, which got most of my creative attention.
         Seven years ago, if you'd asked me whether the writing of poetry could be taught, I would have answered "No."
         But for the last seven years I've been making my living by teaching English to people who are not native speakers of the language. By doing this, I've heightened my own awareness of the English language, and I've had to develop techniques to make my students more aware of what's going on in the average English sentence.
         My students have also taught me things. For example, the word "rubbish" came up in a lesson at a conversation school, some five years ago.
         "Rubbish," said my female student, savoring the word. "That's a beautiful word."
        "Beautiful?"
         "Yes. Like ... like, rabbit."
         And she was right. "Rubbish" is an intrinsically beautiful word, much more beautiful than the comparatively harsh "garbage." But I would never have arrived at that insight unassisted.
        What follows, now, is a kind of introductory sensitivity-raising exercise. Very brief - I'm writing on the train between a couple of English classes.
        Today I was fooling around with some notes for a short poem about getting up in the morning. And I came up with:-

The statistics are yettering

Jumpstart the day

A world which is lumpy with


        What I'm trying to do is catch the stumbling incompetence of my brain-damaged morning mind. I'm actually a night person, and my peak period, in terms of my metabolic cycle, is round about nine o'clock at night.
         First teaching point:-
         If there are two words, the first ending in a consonant and the second starting with a vowel, then the words tend to join together, so that "which is" becomes (in the natural conversational speech of native speakers of English) "whichis."
         This causes problems for students who are not native speakers of English. The student hears "whichis," goes rummaging through his or her lexicon seeking a match, and comes up dry.
         From a teaching point of view, the solution is to teach the joining rule and go so deeply into the analysis of spoken English that the students can, with a reasonable degree of confidence, look at a transcript and predict the joins before they listen to the tape.
         Now, from the point of view of poetry, the point is that "which is" slides together very smoothly to make "whichis," and that does not give the lumpy, disjointed feeling that I'm looking for.
        To get that effect, first I tried fooling with the word order:-

A world lumpy with


Later, however, I decided I could get a better effect (a lumpy, disjointed effect) by messing with the syntax (the word order) rather than by toying with the sounds:-

Lumpy a world which is


And here's the finished poem:-

2003 June 26


The sun unshuttered. The morning
Lumpy a world which is
Elbows, umbrellas.
The train.
The newspaper
Staccato with statistics.
Iran Congo roadmap enemy combatant.
The glib commands of habit.
Down the tracks.
The stressless disasters unspooling on either side.


        I'm not claiming that this is great art, but, even so, a certain sensitivity to language is required to write it, and the point of this piece is that the key to writing poetry is the development of that sensitivity. And that one way to do this is by analyzing language - not necessarily poetry - from as many different angles as possible.




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